Content and Creativity: I love the “look” of this blog! Fantastic topic that I’m sure we all feel guilty about. Seems like we can always be doing more. This is all very nicely done! I liked the way you tied the subject to your own classroom experience.
Voice: I can feel the enthusiasm in the bloggers writing style. Reading this makes me want to rework some of my curriculum!
Mechanics: The writing mechanics are sound and accurate. I did not notice misspellings or obvious punctuation issues.
Text Layout: I like the way the text was broken up between the pictures.
Hyperlinks: I liked that the blogger included hyperlinks to their RSS feed and contact page. Graphics and Multimedia: The video that was embedded opened easily and worked fine. The graphics that were included were placed perfectly to follow the narrative thread.
Citation: The citations appeared to be clear and accurate.
Blog Critique by Doug Sallade
ReplyDeleteContent and Creativity:
I love the “look” of this blog! Fantastic topic that I’m sure we all feel guilty about. Seems like we can always be doing more. This is all very nicely done!
I liked the way you tied the subject to your own classroom experience.
Voice:
I can feel the enthusiasm in the bloggers writing style. Reading this makes me want to rework some of my curriculum!
Mechanics:
The writing mechanics are sound and accurate. I did not notice misspellings or obvious punctuation issues.
Text Layout:
I like the way the text was broken up between the pictures.
Hyperlinks:
I liked that the blogger included hyperlinks to their RSS feed and contact page.
Graphics and Multimedia:
The video that was embedded opened easily and worked fine. The graphics that were included were placed perfectly to follow the narrative thread.
Citation:
The citations appeared to be clear and accurate.