Content and Creativity: The Spartan look of this blog helps draw attention to the video and text. I like the white space around the text and video. The blogger made some very insightful connections between her experience and how that connected to understanding technology.
Voice: I found the tone of the narrative revealed that the blogger was both understood the subject and need for planning of technology integration.
Mechanics: The writing mechanics are sound and accurate. I did not notice misspellings or obvious punctuation issues. Text Layout: The text was of a size and color that was very easy to read. The abundance of white space around the text gave the text more importance
Hyperlinks: The hyperlink was placed in a location in the narrative that helped expand on that portion of the blog. Graphics and Multimedia: The video that was embedded opened easily and worked fine.
Citation: The citations were formatted and footnoted properly.
Content and Creativity - The topic/idea is clearly written and obvious, and its clear Melissa has some thoughts on the subject. Her point is well made, and she provides a great examples of creating a bad ROI on an Ed Tech investment.
Voice - Melissa's post is an easy read, makes sense, and appropriate for the intended audience.
Mechanics - Good!
Text Layout - Looks great. Not an eyesore.
Hyperlinks - Link to a relevant Verizon Foundation article is included, and it's blue!
Graphics/Multimedia - The original video is included, plus an avatar. Nice and simple.
Citation - Materials are referenced using correct format at the end of the blog post.
Blog Critique by Doug Sallade
ReplyDeleteContent and Creativity:
The Spartan look of this blog helps draw attention to the video and text. I like the white space around the text and video. The blogger made some very insightful connections between her experience and how that connected to understanding technology.
Voice:
I found the tone of the narrative revealed that the blogger was both understood the subject and need for planning of technology integration.
Mechanics:
The writing mechanics are sound and accurate. I did not notice misspellings or obvious punctuation issues.
Text Layout:
The text was of a size and color that was very easy to read. The abundance of white space around the text gave the text more importance
Hyperlinks:
The hyperlink was placed in a location in the narrative that helped expand on that portion of the blog.
Graphics and Multimedia:
The video that was embedded opened easily and worked fine.
Citation:
The citations were formatted and footnoted properly.
Content and Creativity - The topic/idea is clearly written and obvious, and its clear Melissa has some thoughts on the subject. Her point is well made, and she provides a great examples of creating a bad ROI on an Ed Tech investment.
ReplyDeleteVoice - Melissa's post is an easy read, makes sense, and appropriate for the intended audience.
Mechanics - Good!
Text Layout - Looks great. Not an eyesore.
Hyperlinks - Link to a relevant Verizon Foundation article is included, and it's blue!
Graphics/Multimedia - The original video is included, plus an avatar. Nice and simple.
Citation - Materials are referenced using correct format at the end of the blog post.
Very nice :-)